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October 11, 2011
Soft is a quiet moment of a poem by ~saartha.
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The rain comes in
from the mountainside

and the musculature
quietens. The birds, the beasts,
the slanting cliff,

the light, the restless
hollowed emptiness,

the bits of lava and bits
of heartbeat and bits of
racing animal mind.

It quietens.

The rain comes in like a slow blink.
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Edit 10/11/11: Oh literature community, you are too kind to me. Thank you to =zebrazebrazebra and ^lightningmonkey for my fourth DD.
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ivykit626's avatar
that's so awesome!